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Anthem: Let the Way be shone


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Immortan Junka

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Let morning shine on the Imperium,
Numerous Nations abundant with natural wealth.
This is my beautiful Alliance
The nest of the Revolution


A people shaped by many hardships
Brought up in a beautiful culture.
Devoting our Nations to this Imperium,
Let the Way be obeyed.

The Liberation of the producer's Will
Overthrowing corruption and exploitation
Glorifying forever this Imperium
Let the Way be shone.



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Shine the Way!

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Immortan Junka

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    SO IT IS DECREED

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HuMann

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Man, reminds me of the Parties.

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A suggestion is near the beginning you have something about "my beautiful alliance" - since everything else is "our" the "my" looks odd there so I suggest changing it to "our" as well.

 

Has a communist/military feel and if that's what you're looking for, well - you succeeded.  Personally I think you should have something showing a little more ...what am I looking for - "human" element?  Where are the mothers and children showing their respect to this great alliance?  Do you allow women to be a part of this glorious revolution too or do they stay at home barefoot and pregnant? :P  (i.e. I see two images of woman and only one looks reasonable - take it out of the 1950's please!!!) 

 

i think you do too much propaganda in general, Junka - but if you are going to do it bring it up to 2015.  Otherwise you are going to turn people, who might otherwise be very good members, away.  I think you want to avoid that.



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